Tuesday, 1 July 2014

Drabble 182

Finished 5:31. The worst thing is when you have one absolutely perfect, except it's just one word over and you can't find a word to take out :(

 

Raven was packing deer meat ready to return home when Blue came running back from wherever he'd gone, soaking wet and, much to Raven's disgust, entirely naked. He did his best to cover his eyes, since Blue was making no effort to cover anything, and said, “For heaven’s sake put some clothes on; please!”

The lake was much colder than I was expecting,” said Blue. “Why do they always have to look like the water's warm when it's freezing?”

That's wonderful but would you please put some clothes on?” asked Raven.

I think the leprechaun stole my clothes,” said Blue.

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